There once was a ghost,
Who liked to eat toast,
From the garbage bins.
But then one day,
Instead of toast,
There were only pins.
So the ghost was very sad to say,
There would be no toast today.
Thursday, June 21, 2018
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Hi Livia my name is Olivia and I am a student at st Francis of Assisi school.My Favourite part is when the ghost finds out that there is no toast.Did you think about Instead of the garbage bins it could be someones house or something else that's not that.I wan't to know why you decided to do it about ghosts did you have a topic you had to do it on or did you just decide to do it on ghosts and toast?
ReplyDeleteI made a poem called my cousin and I and this reminds me of it.
Have you made any other poems that i might like to read?
Hi Olivia. To answer one of your questions, the reason I wrote my poem about ghosts and toast was because at school we had to write some poems and post them on our blogs. I was trying to do a sort of funny/simple poem and just found some words that rhymed, so I shoved them together into a poem! I have written one more poem about A guy named Bob who really liked to rob. Maybe you should read that :P
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